One of the most basic things you do when you write a book, especially a children's book is to read what you've written outloud, to see if it flows properly and makes sense. This is like, primary school level writing advice.
With that in mind, how the fuck does one pronounce "Russionia" or read any of these lines.
Though one thing I find very interesting about conservative children's books, is that normally when presenting an issue to young children, you need to simplify it, so they can grasp it more easily and apply it to their lives. But Conservative books don't do this, they just replace their personal bugbears with talking animals or medieval knights and never actually simplify their message, it is always a 1:1 message because their ideas and thought process are so simplistic that they literally cannot simplify it anymore, or examine it and put it in a new context, because it is always just "(specific thing) that I don't like is bad."